fashion attempt: to write.

On another job application, I was asked to submit three samples of my writing and at least one ala fashion column/feature-esque essay. This was the night before my initial interview people, I had exactly 3 hours before bedtime to try and rack my brains for ideas, squeeze my creative juices and what's left of it (in a jaded state this was- excruciating!), and come up with fashionable fab thoughts on this subject. Here is my feeble attempt to editor-mode myself to land this job- I supposedly perceived this to be carefully thought, well written and wittingly conveyed.. turned out to be more like something out of a freehand-writing whim. Not the best i've done. :/

I don't know if I'm being overly critique but I have read this piece over and over again, and it's just not good enough.. not even for me... for an unemployed, unexperienced writer-wannabe?? harsh. I do think this essay came out more like a thesis on sociology and fashion as opposed to a fashion column...

Just click on the pictures for a larger view... that way you can read 'em. I like giving you a hard time.

i suck :x